" = talking
' = thinking
*= sound effect
Skating across a frozen lake Adrian was having the time of his life, there was nothing he loved more than the outside and skating
As he was preparing to get off the frozen lake, he fell on the ice, breaking it and falling through, he started panicking, struggling to syay afloat as his attempts to pull himself up only ended in him falling back into the water
As time passed Adrian had less and less strength left to struggle, until eventually succumbing to his fate and sinking into the freezing water, dying shortly after
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Once he awoke he could see he was on a very long bridge, easily stretching for more than the eye could see
Adrian tapped the shoulder of the guy in front of him
Adrian: "hey, uhhh, do you know where we are?"
Tom: "I think we're in the afterlife, I mean everyone here died before"
Adrian: "damn, so I really did die"
Tom: "if you don't mind me asking, how did you die?"
Adrian: "I was ice skating, then I fell through the ice, tried to crawl back up and all that, never made it out, the ice was too slippery. You?"
Tom: "a truck crashed into me, asshole sped through a red light"
Adrian: "damn, did it hurt?"
Tom: "a bit, yea, I mean not for long but you get what I mean"
Adrian: "yea, yea, because you died shortly after, so... what now?"
Tom: "we wait, that's it"
Adrian sighed and waited,moving forward every few minutes
1 day later he was nearing the front of the line, now being able to see a gigantic winged creature of light
Adrian doesn't pay much attention until he's at the front of the line, listening to the creature speak
L■■■■■■: "congratulations, you died, now as per protocol you get 2 wishes, let's make this fast to not waste time."
Adrian: "wait what? Protocol?"
L■■■■■■: "yes, protocol now just say what you want and you'll get reborn in a random world."
Adrian: "can i choose the world i get sent to with a wish?"
L■■■■■■: "yes, now get this over with already."
Adrian: "my first wish is to be reborn in dragon ball."
L■■■■■■: okay, now for your second wish?"
Adrian: "i wish to be reborn as an ancient saiyan."
L■■■■■■: "any specifications?
Adrian: "uhh, no"
L■■■■■■: "alright, suit yourself, now go to the door on the right to begin your journey"
Adrian: "what even are you?"
L■■■■■■: "an angel, now get out."
Adrian: "your not god?"
L■■■■■■: "no, now get OUT."
Adrian: "okay, jeez."
Then adrian ran to the door and opened it, walking in
As Adrian went in, a bright light enveloped him and he disappeared.
L■■■■■■: 'that was probably one of the chillest humans that has ever come here, but less work for me so that's a plus. '
Fin.
So i rewrote this story cause i had a new idea and no ideas with this one so yeah i'm probably not gonna post much but i'm gonna get to atleast chapter 10 this time.
Wait, did I rewrite this?