Here is the corrected version of Chapter 1 with all instances of "Siddharth" changed to Sahil:
Chapter 1
"No no what is happening stop it God!" Sahil shouts.
This is the year 2305. At this time, the humans of Earth attacked the alien spaceship with their most powerful weapon—nuclear missiles—but it did not have much effect. Just ten to fifteen aliens got hurt. This alien species is called the Dalvik species.
When humans saw that even their most powerful weapon had no effect on the Dalviks, everyone lost hope and thought the world was about to end. But at that moment, superpowers awakened inside millions of determined humans, most of them being martial artists. Some gained elemental powers, some defensive or attacking powers, some healing abilities—and among all of them, the most powerful were gravitational manipulation and energy absorption.
Many of these newly awakened superpowered humans fought back against the Dalviks. Half of Earth's population was wiped out, but the Dalviks suffered heavy damage too and eventually retreated to their planet. Before they left, a human scientist named Akshat Verma, who had the superpower of technopathy, stole a lot of data from the Dalviks and handed it over to the newly formed World Government (as Earth was no longer divided into countries after the alien invasion).
From this alien data, humans discovered how the Dalviks became so powerful despite lacking innate superpowers—they would travel to different planets, kill the beasts there, and absorb their powers. They would also use the beasts' bones to create weapons, armors, and even spaceships.
This information gave the humans direction. They knew Dalviks wouldn't stay quiet forever. Though the aliens hadn't returned to Earth, the World Government and scientists understood—they were simply studying humans now, learning how to absorb superpowers for themselves.
Among these humans was Sahil, a 17-year-old orphan. His parents had died fighting in the war against Dalviks. Though his family, the powerful Yadavs, traded in beast weapons, they refused to take him in. They only sent him a monthly allowance of twenty thousand rupees.
Sahil, as always, sat cross-legged in meditation, trying to awaken his inner powers. After five minutes, he stood up frustrated—his power had not awakened. Despite his family's powerful background, Sahil was a "loser"—a rare human without superpowers.
His late parents had locked away many things for him in a secret room of their house, which he visited daily. To enter, he used a password—his birth date. Inside glowed beast weapons, armors, and even rare soul weapons. However, without powers, Sahil could not activate any of them.
One day, while particularly sad due to his upcoming admission to the Military Academy, Sahil noticed a red box hidden behind a golden sword—something he had never seen before. On it was a blue dragon symbol. Inside the box was a golden pill. He assumed it to be a superpower pill, though unsure if it had side effects.
"Better to die trying than to live powerless," Sahil thought and swallowed the pill.
At first, nothing happened. Then, suddenly, his body rose in the air, glowing golden.
"No no what is happening stop it God!" Sahil screamed.
He fell to the ground and a voice echoed in his mind:
"Supreme System Activated."
A status window appeared:
Name: Sahil Yadav
Race: Nexari
Class: Emotion Weaver
Level: 1
Stats:
Strength: 10
Agility: 11
Intelligence: 20
Willpower: 10
Celestial Points: 0/100
Qi Level: Qi Gathering Level 0
Skills:
Emotion Absorption (unlocked)
Generate Emotion Crystal (unlocked)
Blue Dragon Fist (unlocked)
Blue Laser Fist (locked)
Equipment:
Emotion Crystal: Stores emotional energy for strength/survival.
Nexari Sword (locked)
Drawbacks:
Iron Vulnerability: Contact with iron reduces 80% of stats.
Salt Damage: Contact with or consumption of salt reduces stats by 10%.
Sahil was stunned. He had only read about systems like these in comics and manhwas.
"System open," he said aloud. The system interface appeared.
"Quest open," he commanded. A simple task popped up:
Quest: Do ten push-ups.
Reward: 20 Celestial Points
Sahil quickly completed the push-ups. A voice said:
"Quest completed. Reward: 20 Celestial Points."
Curious, he tried 20 more push-ups, but no additional reward came.
He asked again:
"Quest open."
Another voice responded:
"One daily quest completed out of five."
The other daily tasks included:
10 Squats (10 pts)
10 Sit-ups (10 pts)
Drink 3 liters water (10 pts)
10 minutes cardio (20 pts)
Sahil completed all five, including drinking 3 liters of water and using a holographic gadget to follow a cardio routine.
He opened his status window again:
Name: Sahil Yadav
Race: Nexari
Class: Emotion Weaver
Level: 1
Celestial Points: 70/100
Qi Level: Qi Gathering Level 1
Still curious, he went back to the secret room to find more information. Among thousands of books his parents left, he found one titled "Qi Cultivation."
Excited, Sahil whispered to himself, "So many surprises today... and on my birthday too." Yes—it was his 17th birthday, though no one celebrated.
He went to bed, looking forward to the next day—when he would finally join the Military Academy.
Now that Sahil had a Supreme System, will he teach a lesson to the bullies? And what awaits him in the Military Academy?
Read on to find out in Supreme System.
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