So, I want to explain my writing style for a moment since I really don't want to end up in the same situation as the Vegito fic.
Repetition.
Now how do I use repetition and why?
First of ways I use it is in different povs, where sometimes the characters notice the same things, like I used with Lelouch and Mikasa (or was it Goku?) Noticing Mark looking at his hands as if they weren't his.
This is me showing their intelligence and how well they think the same.
I also repeat things to people who weren't around for when something was explained, though I try to do it in different words.
Besides that I use repetition to sometimes show a characters shock and emphasising how much its affecting them.
Like in the Lelouch chapter, the one from chapter 2 where he is literally seeing something stronger than what he though was GOD.
Something that could remake the universe, and there that same guy is just... making pancakes?
That's gonna need some serious getting used to and dealing with by getting the facts straight.
I'm just trying to be realistic here my dear readers.
How I write is how I imagine it to be logically, people in my fics can forget things since in real life people forget things,
They can repeat things as well because of stupidity(when losing an argument thinking by repeating something enough it becomes truth(It doesn't)). But some people in life do that.
So yeah, that's simply how I write. Hope you guys don't mind.
Also, the reason that Goku appears so philosophical, sorry if this is like a bit of a rant, I just gained a bad review for this, and am just annoyed since people just seem to NOT FUCKING READ THE SYNOPSIS that this guy is ZAMASU AND NOT KAKAROT!
Phew... Got that off my chest, Also just so you guys know, this is not intended for any of my kind readers, you guys are awesome and I very much appreciate your engagement, comments, etc.
It really puts a smile on my face.
Makes me want to continue writing.
Its just for the people who are going to appear eventually, the ones among them that will wish to complain and all that, ones I am not in the mood of answering over and over again.
So that's why.
Well, I hope to see you all next chapter my friends,
Bye!